Girls Love Light Painting
hello fellow alphas
these are some recent pictures i'd like to share and get feedback on.
some are light graffiti, some are projection, some are flash.
as always using my a700 with cz 24-70 and wireless flash or projector. all are single exposures
i'm getting more comfortable with models, right now just having fun shoots with friends.
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any feedback is much appreciated!
i'm not sure if i'm indecisive or not.








well done Joe, Your style is getting more and more refined with every post. so lets get started with the critique. number one seems properly exposed but isn't doing it for me. I think because we are seeing the same guy twice and he is doing pretty much the same thing. if he was moving differently (not jumping) i think this photo would work much better. number 2 think you did it perfect, silouette lines are nice and crisp, trails are nice and not overpoerwing. well done. number 3 i think the colors are too saturated and overpowering. you can barely define the models curves...it almost looks like you superimposed a head on the prints, if the colors were less saturated i think you would be able to make out her features much better. Number 4, by far my favorite of the group. i wouldn't change a thing. Definatly could see this in a magazine somewhere, or maybe a billboard. well done. number 5 i think the original orientation would be better (potrait view just makes it look too weird)..looks like she was standing up next to a wall. other then that its fine. and last but not least..number 6, i thought was very intresting having a grown up play with kid's toys in her sun dress. like the lens flare too..adds a certain mystique to it. All your crops seem to be just right in these. keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.
Charlie
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